Conclusion Paragraph part deux

Explanation examples 1st!!!!!!!

the transformation of men from being happy and kind to being grey with dying eyes
how the bullets are like the teeth biting through flesh and ripping and tearing it apart
 she can't belive that his dead
describe precisely, the gases and how hopeless were the soldiers
 She can only remember him in his khaki tunic and not his face or how he used to be
the girl can't see his face but only his khaki uniform.
how the soldiers are dragged down through the horrors of war
we should never forget
the death and tragedy of war.


 "Have you forgotten yet is repeated at the beginning and at the end of the poem.It tells us we should never forget the death and tragedy of war. Some of  Sassoon's friends was killed in the war, and even he was injured.
Sassoon uses a lot of ways to express how horrible the war was.

Conclusion paragraphs

Introduction paragraphs

Poetry Paragraphs

All paragraphs completed by Friday.

please :)

Videos and paragraphs

Please post the link to your 5 minute poetry video on your blog. (make sure the video is set to unlisted)

Two more paragraphs need to be written (to a total of five) for Monday please.

Have a great weekend!

Thursday visits

Vlada 18:29

WW1 wrap up

5 min presentations finished for Friday please

Clean-up Friday

Your paragraphs on The Soldier & The Sentry are due for next Wednesday.

Make sure your poetry presentations are in the google drive folder or posted on youtube (with the link on your blog)

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Collect your copy of "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time," (they are in the window by the desk) and start reading!

Have a great long weekend!